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Hi Deborah, here is the re-submission of my introduction. I tried to incorporate all of your feedback points. I am unsure of the order, as I read it to see if Holy Spirit would give me anything else it seemed as it was not flowing the way I wanted it to. So, the paragraphs may be out of sequence. As well I felt like sometimes, I was too repetitive Also I am working on a realistic plan to get caught up by our next submission. I plan to discuss it with Marily tomorrow in our check-in call.