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May 9, 2024 19:30

Will call in AM – have meetings after 12 noon.

Great, I really like. Only 3 minor changes/corrections:

1. Chp 1, p. 25: Historical or author’s fact above last speaker (B. Hicks) and not speaker’s conversation (note same speaker above and below this fact:

“The storytellers born in the 1930s …..”

2. Chp 2, p. 34 for speaker J. Roscoe (next to last speaker on page – Change:

” All the roads around here [Evans] were dirt roads when I was younger. Only one road was wide enough for cars to travel together in both directions.” Eliminate the sentence beginning with “Martinez….”

3. Chp 3. p. 106: (minor point) 2nd full paragraph beginning with “Mrs. Freddie Evans . . . “. The last sentence should read: “her passion for gospel music “WAS” also noted vs. is.

Thanks so much!

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