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Hi!! I am submitting my outline and introduction. I included the short purpose statement and what the book is about. I have always struggled with organizing my thoughts, and I am also not a strong writer; therefore, it really takes me a long time to get my thoughts on paper. My title is not firm yet. I am looking to tell a story at the beginning of each chapter that takes the reader through the journey of my mother’s near-death experience in the ICU and the hospital’s attempt to cover it up. After I use the first section to tell the ongoing story, I plan to use the second half of the chapter to provide information they can use to avoid what we went through potentially. I look to provide additional tools/resources at the end of the book they can always reference to help them in their healthcare journey. I didn’t want to go any further without you reviewing the outline and enabling you to provide feedback on my direction. I started generating some thoughts in chapter one, but they are incomplete.
I look forward to hearing back from you soon. Sorry about my delay. I told Marilyn I had to write a response for my attorney for a legal issue, and it was very detailed and long, so it took me forever, and then I was out of town. I am very nervous about this project, but I am praying for God’s grace to get me through. Thank you!!!