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| Romanticizing the Sin Nature.docx Kara / Deborah Jun 17, 2022 06:19 |
Hi!!!! Almost there – two final suggestions: 1. In your devotional processing questions, adjust questions that are easily answered with one or two words. For example, “Have you ever done…?” can turn into “Have you ever done…? Why do you think you did that? What was the outcome?” Add enough meat to the questions. That the reader had to truly process to drive your points home! 2. I’d love to see some reiteration at the end of Ch 5 that “mastering the sin nature” IS knowing Him and remaining in fellowship with Him. I just really don’t want ppl to leave your text with a works-based, religious mindset. I’m so very proud of you, Jesús! You must feel wonderful! God is faithful, Friend. If you decide to take these last two suggestions, just text me when you’re done. You’ll be ready for editing immediately after. If you’re not going to take them, you’re ready today. Let me know! Much love to Darcy and the kiddos. |
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| Romanticizing the Sin Nature.docx Jun 11, 2022 21:08 |
Revised chapter 5 plus devotionals |
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