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Thank you for your feedback I really appreciate it. I do not see your comments on the document could it be because of where im writing its Called Pages? About the purpose and the why I want to share as much information that will kind of tie all together how and why I ended up in the situations I did before finally being set free to shed light on the cycles and how generational curses operate but i am struggling with putting to much focus on the negative and little positive like I don’t want the readers to get board or depressed before the happy ending because there’s is a lot of bad before the good or is that ok?

Hi Mariaelena! So glad to be working with you. I am reviewing your text and making some notes for you to consider. Thank you for your transparency and for your voice – it will be impactful! I am going to make some notes in your document; please tell me if you can see them. Your introduction is such beautiful analogy – you have painted a strong picture. I left a comment in the text that you should be sure to structure the text in sections within the chapters to break up the stories within the chapters. KEEP GOING! You are going to be fine. Please remember to focus on your why – why you are including each piece of information, in service of your goal/purpose for your text. That will help you discern which pieces of information are critical to moving the story forward and which pieces of information are not so important.

This is the outline the intro and half of the first chapter of my book I will continue to add as I continue to write thank you