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Hello Kara,
I am so sorry for submitting this document so late for your final feedback. In my misunderstanding, I thought I had to submit the document by Friday and I didn’t think that I had time to resend it to you. Nonetheless, I cleared it with Marilyn this morning and she said that I should send the document to you for your feedback on the changes that you suggested. Per your suggestions, I did make a minor change to the introduction so that the reader knows that the content of the book pertains to all gifts. I also made a major change to the beginning of chapter 5, taking out the story about Brad the tennis player, and adding my story of persevering in the dance during a difficult time. I also modified the conclusion to remind the readers that I speak from my experiences. I also read through the document and I think it has a better flow and connection but your feedback and your approval for the release of the manuscript is what I await to hear. Thanks Kara!

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