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Feb 17, 2024 14:14

Thanks so much to the Developmental Editor. I have reviewed and revised the manuscript based on feedback.
1. Storytellers now have greater identity through brief introductions within the Introduction (Placement in this section worked best for the flow of the paper).
1. Chp 1 was reworked to show the background history of the relevance of the Civil War, laws abolishing slavery, and the Reconstruction Period to the storytellers’ family history – prior to actual family history.
2. As indicated in the Introduction – all storytellers’ volunteered viewpoints added details to this historical document and were thus included.
3. Hopefully a more significant statement as to the importance of Board Street, Augusta Ga is now presented.
4. A major goal is that the completed book will be a great read by both younger and older readers – therefore, more headings were added for the purpose of clearer timelines of noted home, school, and church transformations.
5. Again, this is my first attempt adding citations – Chicago-style – so definitely requires review.

Overall, I am very pleased to submit this historical manuscript and look forward to progressing to complete publication and enjoyment by others.

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