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Book – 2021Draft 2(AutoRecovered).docx Kara / Deborah Aug 2, 2022 07:23 |
Hi!!!! You have added so much! Such deep work, Mable. Are you finished? I assume you will conclude differently? As a reader, I am wondering if you would say your good days outweighed your bad days or that your bad days outweighed your good? Upon reading your text, it kind of feels like you had more bad than good. When you re-read, does it feel that way for you too? How did your readers feel? |
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Book – 2021Draft 2(AutoRecovered).docx Aug 1, 2022 22:31 |
Hi Cara, I made some update since the last version. |
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